Assignment 3: U C what I C

For this assignment, i'm currently re-doing the whole storyline becuase the feedback from the tutor is that generally our stories lack the "twist" needed in the story. MOst of our storyline are too predictable in the end or if not it lacks the surprise or the ultimate twist.

Therefore i actually thought of re-doing the whole assignment. At first my idea was to show very action packed pictures kind of showcasing a hero etc then in the end it was just a FAT guy dreaming in his dreams. A story of a uy walking up to his REALITY.

But i personally dont really liked the story, as i find it "common" or rather lacked the X-factor. Moreover the photos were hard to grasp and take and the visuals of showing a guy as a hero is difficult to portray. So i decided to change it TOTALLY.

After brainstorming for quite some time, i finally came out with a idea that i liked more. The story links more or less to the Halloween that is soon to come. =)

I have developed my idea into sketch ups, so here they are:




Girl came back from a date, and kiss goodbye with her boyfriend.





Girl continues to wave goodbye while she retreats back facing into the lift.

(focus is back facing lift)





Presses the Level 13





Lift door closes with girl in the foreground, and a dark looking figure in the background.

(introduction of a new character)





Suddenly girl notices the dark figure in the reflection.





Girl is traumatised by the ghostly figure.

The horrifying "ghost" approaches her.





Girl faints from shock.

Horrifying "ghost" gives the awkward questionable face, holding a bottle of liquor in his hand.





What the girl thought to be a real "ghost", is actually fake.

The "ghost" just came back from the annual halloween party.










** The photos will be uploaded soon. Also i will discuss this new storyline with my tutor. =)