Design (1):
Comments: I added in the colours after the last critique session, and also skewed the shape of the logos. Not much comments was given other than someone pointed out that the "Y" could be more obvious, becuase it seems more like a "!". However the tutor commented that maybe i should consider having a background for the design rather than just white plain background. Also she said that all the borders for the letters are too uniformed. i should play around with the colours and borders more, maybe adding shades and shadows etc ..Design (2):
Comments: "Messy" was the first word that came.. haha.. And i think it looked quite true though. But i thought of giving it a messy look because it will seems like it is something i hate and since the idea is "stench". But still maybe i overdid it. haha.. Another comment was that the letters could be better represented. Colours wise, they say it may be abit too bright since it is a "I Hate", so it should perhaps be more dull looking. Comments from tutor was still the "background", leaving it empty seems incomplete. Borders wise there are variations, she said unlike the first piece of work where it is uniformed.
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